Friday, 8 February 2013

Chloe's Haunted House


Lola had just moved to a new house, a creepy house. She didn’t like this house one bit, the windows were loose and often had frost on the inside, things loomed in the night and worst of all her room was the creepiest, gloomiest, dampest of all! One night her windows started to shake and there was a faint scratching at the panels of the white door... Lola was petrified she started to shiver as she slowly reached for the icy cold doorknob...

Broomhill Primary

1 comment:

  1. I love the phrase "things loomed in the night!" Superb!

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