Wednesday, 2 November 2011

Liam Morris and Josh Drever

I was sitting on the couch and I heard a scream. So I grabbed a knife and opened the door slowly when I seen Long Lankin holding my daughter over a bowl while the nurse was slicing her neck and letting the blood run into the bowl maybe so he could breath in the blood to get rid of his disease.


  1. Horrific! You could describe some feelings perhaps or how the knife shook in your grip?

  2. This is truly horrible! I felt a bit sick reading this - your writing definitely worked for me!