Wednesday, 2 November 2011

Joe and Connor

Suddenly I heard a noise down stairs. My baby started to cry. So carefully I made my way downstairs. When I got to the top of the stairs there was strange man looking at me in the eye. His skin was green and dirty with black spots all over his face.

3 comments:

  1. The start of a nasty description. How did you feel when you saw him?

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  2. The strange man at the top of the stairs, very creepy. I like how this is written from the mother's point of view.

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  3. Simple and straightforward, which is usually good. What happens next?

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