Wednesday, 2 November 2011

Joe and Connor

Suddenly I heard a noise down stairs. My baby started to cry. So carefully I made my way downstairs. When I got to the top of the stairs there was strange man looking at me in the eye. His skin was green and dirty with black spots all over his face.


  1. The start of a nasty description. How did you feel when you saw him?

  2. The strange man at the top of the stairs, very creepy. I like how this is written from the mother's point of view.

  3. Simple and straightforward, which is usually good. What happens next?