Wednesday, 2 November 2011

C.M, H.T and L.R

As the woman walks down the creepy ridged stair case she hears her baby screaming.


The candle shaking, she hears squeaky footsteps on the shaking floorboards. The floorboards shake as the dimming light on the lit candle was soon fading out, as she walks down to the next floor. Crack, creak, crack, and creak. She feels a cold, damp blow.

It all ends, its over. The creeping man says...

3 comments:

  1. "The dimming light on the lit candle," I love it. Good use of onomatopoeia too! Nice!

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  2. "It all ends, its over. The creeping man says..."
    Such a chilling way to end.

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