Wednesday, 2 November 2011

Charlotte Kip

Lady Weary came down the stairs because the baby was crying. When she was at the bottom it was pitch black and Long lankin was ready to get her and he killed the baby and her.

2 comments:

  1. Very scary! Why don't you try closing your eyes and imagine the sounds and smells of the scene. Then write it again with a tiny bit more detail. Then it'll be even scarier!

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