Lady Weary came down the stairs because the baby was crying. When she was at the bottom it was pitch black and Long lankin was ready to get her and he killed the baby and her.
Very scary! Why don't you try closing your eyes and imagine the sounds and smells of the scene. Then write it again with a tiny bit more detail. Then it'll be even scarier!
Maybe it was my reading diet as a child, maybe it's just the way I am but my writing always comes out a little bit... dark. My first children's novel, 'Mortlock' is published by Bloomsbury in 2010
Spooky! How did you feel?
ReplyDeleteVery scary! Why don't you try closing your eyes and imagine the sounds and smells of the scene. Then write it again with a tiny bit more detail. Then it'll be even scarier!
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