I turned fast scoping the dark, misty streets. I spun back sensing foot steps or tiptoes creeping towards me. Slowly I moved my head around. There was something following! I saw its bulging, blood shot eyes appear out of the shadows. It stepped out and limped into the light.
By James Smith 8YK
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I love the 'bulging bloodshot eye' it sounds so horrible and it limps too, brilliant!
ReplyDeleteMe, too! And I love "scoping the dark, misty streets". Sets a tone right away.
ReplyDeleteI like the cliff-hanger ending "It stepped out and limped into the light" is a really creepy description. Brilliant!
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